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Tuesday, July 26, 2011

My favorite place to be . . .

Not quite sure of a fitting title for this one yet, I don't want to just have it Temple, I need suggestions. Thanks for the help. :)

Early morning rays,
gradually and softly,
fall on the white stone.
Making it sparkle,
glistening with jewels.

Covenants are made.
Blessings and wondrous miracles.
Hope and security,
a home from heaven,
filled with eternal love.

Rooms flowing with comfort,
pure and bright.
Promise of a forever family.









2 comments:

  1. Eternal Whisper? Eternal Moment? Glimpse of Forever?

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  2. Maybe... Sitting at the Temple? Here at the Temple? In the Morning's glow?
    I love you! It's a GREAT poem. Keep at it!

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